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The weight of the world on her shoulders,
All of it heavier than boulders.
The flames of pain
Driving her insane--
As the world grows colder.
All of it heavier than boulders.
The flames of pain
Driving her insane--
As the world grows colder.
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Regret
Dad, I know you think I'm a mistake,
And I've made everyone you love break.
I only stand and watch,
My life is just a big botch.
Have I ever made you proud?
I can't help that the voices are so loud.
Will I ever get the smile?
Instead of giving you a mouth full of bile.
I know I've let you down,
Causing you to only frown.
I'm truly sorry, dad
I wish , I was the daughter, you never had.
Literature
Regret
I always make it right
I just don't sleep at night
Literature
A Dishonest Misunderstanding
"It's here, it's here!" I shouted excitedly, running back to the living room with my parcel clutched tightly in my hands to search frantically for a pair of scissors. My parents had promised me a smartphone for my birthday if I was good, after years of wanting one, and years of being the only kid without one, and I'd been as good as gold all year. Better than I'd ever been. My birthday had come and gone two weeks ago with nothing, but they'd promised it was in the mail, and sure enough here was a phone-sized parcel with my name on it!
Finding the scissors, I tore into the packaging with fervour and swiftly uncovered...a fisher-price smartpho
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I'm on a poetry-writing streak -sighs- It's, like, nearly two in the morning here, but I couldn't let this idea go.
Limerick.
It can be seen as either fanfiction for Tales of Symphonia (Colette's point of view) or The Secret Life of Bees (May's point of view) or a single.
I might write more poetry, limericks specifically -- who knows?
Comments, critique, opinions are all encouraged.
~PT
Tales of Symphonia (c) Viz Media and that gaming thing
The Secret Life of Bees (c) Sue Monk Kidd
Limerick.
It can be seen as either fanfiction for Tales of Symphonia (Colette's point of view) or The Secret Life of Bees (May's point of view) or a single.
I might write more poetry, limericks specifically -- who knows?
Comments, critique, opinions are all encouraged.
~PT
Tales of Symphonia (c) Viz Media and that gaming thing
The Secret Life of Bees (c) Sue Monk Kidd
© 2009 - 2024 PTDaHood
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I think the final line seems to short, and in your last limerick the final line was almost to short. Watch your final line.