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Weight of The World

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The weight of the world on her shoulders,
All of it heavier than boulders.
The flames of pain
Driving her insane--
As the world grows colder.
I'm on a poetry-writing streak -sighs- It's, like, nearly two in the morning here, but I couldn't let this idea go.

Limerick.

It can be seen as either fanfiction for Tales of Symphonia (Colette's point of view) or The Secret Life of Bees (May's point of view) or a single.

I might write more poetry, limericks specifically -- who knows?

Comments, critique, opinions are all encouraged.

~PT

Tales of Symphonia (c) Viz Media and that gaming thing
The Secret Life of Bees (c) Sue Monk Kidd
© 2009 - 2024 PTDaHood
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Loconn's avatar
I think the final line seems to short, and in your last limerick the final line was almost to short. Watch your final line.